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We're all thieving, polluting criminals, aren't we?
You twist cotton and facades, forming a curtain of
pity me, pity me, pity me
and all the sane want to do is
smother you, smother you, smother you.
We're all thieving, polluting criminals,
if we don't listen to you, if we don't pity you
and I do not wish to pity you.
All it needs to be, is written
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:iconwylderwolf:
WylderWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Hmm.
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:iconmarashete:
Marashete Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
hm?
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:iconwylderwolf:
WylderWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Mmh.
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:iconmarashete:
Marashete Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
This is a result of Sweeney Todd. Watched at Neista's last night. I was listening to Empathy as I wrote it. The original line was "We're all thieving, polluting wenches, aren't we?" but I didn't like the way it flowed.
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:iconwylderwolf:
WylderWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahh! I thought it seemed familiar!
Sorry I have no coherent response-- I got an hour a sleep XD
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:iconmarashete:
Marashete Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Nah it's fine. I'm pretty much the same XD
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